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Money seems to have a strange power over human beings.Today, it is almost impossible for us to live without money. However, there are two different attitudes related to money. Some people argue ‘money is the root of all evil’, while other people believe otherwise. Money has become a factor for humans to lose their morality and to indulge in financial malefaction. However, it is also the key to happiness in one's life.

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To begin with, one of the strongest arguments that 'money is the root of all evil’ is that money has become a factor for humans to lose their morality. Money has presented man with great temptations Although money is necessary in people's lives. Some believe it provides a path to greed, sloth, lust, envy, gluttony, wrath and pride. Money also sows mistrust. It ends friendships. Experiments have found that money encourages people to lie and to cheat. Even people who were morally right have succumbed to obsession for money and have transformed themselves to commit many wrongdoings. Given the reaction, people are convinced money has the ability to weaken even the firmest ethical backbones.

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Furthermore, money has led some people to indulge in financial malefaction just to stay in power. The quest for money by covetous leaders has led them to the breaking of moral and legal codes. Some world leaders have been featured In media headlines not for their heroic act,accomplishment but for robbing their nations and siphoning their ill-gotten gain in safe haven. Some createdeconomic warfare and global financial crises to stay in control over the poor nations. ln the process they destroyed the nations and displaced millions to an extent where many civilians lost their lives due to poverty or civil war. On this basis, people agree that 'money is the root of all evil'.

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On the flip side, money is not considered evil but a contributing factor to happiness. Studies show that people become happy when they have money for survival, especially to afford necessities such as good healthcare and decent education for children. Research shows that money is a tool to motivate people to achieve major milestones in their lives, which can make them happier in the long run. According to a survey done by psychology students, 83% of respondents said that they are happy when they have money because they could help others who are in need to become happy too. Thus, no one can dispute that money, when it is in the hands of the rich and the poor, brings happiness to them.

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After considering the different points of view and the supporting evidence, it is crucial to look at money in a broader perspective. Is money really the root of all evil? Although money may bring about pitfalls to people, it is an indispensable thing to run one’s life. It is something that we need to survive and it is one of the most manipulative objects that can control us. However, money by itself is not evil but it is love and greed for money that has prompted people to misuse it. Probably money is just a victim in the game played by Man.

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Accidents on the road often spark debates over which gender makes a better driver, and assumptions about gender and driving capabilities frequently emerge, particularly when accidents involve female or male drivers. Some people may quickly assume that a woman involved in an accident lacks driving skills or that a male driver acted recklessly, possibly due to overconfidence. Many female drivers claim they excel in driving because of their motherly instinct, a natural attentiveness, and a strong ability to follow traffic rules. On the other hand, male drivers argue that their confidence, enhanced visual-spatial skills, and quick reaction times make them more capable on the road.

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Women tend to exhibit more patience and politeness towards other road users, qualities often linked to their motherly instincts and innate conscientiousness. These traits contribute to making women generally safer drivers, as they are less likely to engage in road rage or aggressive driving behaviors. Women are often calm, composed, and cautious behind the wheel, especially when overtaking other vehicles. Unlike their male counterparts, who may display disrespectful behavior such as continuous honking, tailgating, and making intimidating gestures, women are more likely to drive in a manner that fosters safety and respect on the road. Studies have shown that male drivers are more likely to act aggressively, which significantly increases the chances of accidents. In contrast, women's more careful driving approach reduces the likelihood of being involved in dangerous situations, as they prioritize safety over speed or dominance.

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Women are generally better at learning and obeying rules, a quality that enhances their ability to drive safely. With a natural tendency to absorb and follow regulations, women are often more diligent in adhering to road safety laws. Their longer attention span makes them less likely to develop bad habits, such as using a mobile phone while driving, drinking alcohol, or smoking behind the wheel—behaviors that are more commonly associated with male drivers. For example, studies have shown that women are more likely to wear their seatbelts, with around 70% of women consistently buckling up, compared to a lower percentage of men. This adherence to safety measures helps reduce the risk of serious injuries or fatalities in the event of an accident. Furthermore, women tend to be better at judging the risks associated with driving, which can ultimately prevent fatal accidents. In contrast, men are statistically more likely to be involved in accidents that result in death, as their driving behaviors often include higher speeds and riskier maneuvers. Therefore, women's careful approach to driving contributes to their reputation as safer drivers, both in terms of their compliance with traffic laws and their ability to make sound decisions behind the wheel.

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On the other hand, men are often seen as more confident behind the wheel, which they believe makes them better drivers. This confidence is often linked to their greater driving experience, as men tend to drive more miles and are generally more familiar with the workings of a vehicle. Their intuitive understanding of how a car operates allows them to react quickly in various driving situations. Compared to women, who may be less confident and more easily distracted or prone to panic in stressful situations, men often feel more in control on the road. However, this overconfidence can sometimes be detrimental, as it may lead to riskier driving behaviors or a lack of caution. While men’s confidence might give them an advantage in some aspects of driving, it can also increase the likelihood of accidents, especially when their self-assurance causes them to underestimate potential hazards or overestimate their own abilities. Therefore, although men’s confidence can be seen as an asset, it can also contribute to more dangerous driving situations compared to the more cautious and controlled approach often seen in female drivers.

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Additionally, men possess stronger visual processing skills and spatial awareness, which are often attributed to the effects of testosterone. These abilities give men an edge in tasks that require quick decision-making and spatial judgment, such as interpreting road conditions and reacting to changes in the environment. Men are able to assess these factors more rapidly, giving them a notable advantage in situations like parking, where quick and accurate judgment is key. In contrast, more women tend to experience difficulty in estimating distances or maneuvering in tight spaces, often resulting in a poorer sense of direction. This disparity can make tasks like parallel parking or navigating narrow streets more challenging for women, though it should be noted that these differences do not necessarily translate into overall driving safety. While men’s superior spatial awareness may help them in certain driving tasks, it does not automatically make them safer drivers, as other factors such as caution and adherence to traffic laws play a more significant role in preventing accidents. Therefore, while men’s enhanced visual processing skills can provide an advantage in some driving scenarios, they do not guarantee better driving overall.

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In conclusion, the ongoing debate over which gender makes a better driver is likely to persist, as both sides present valid arguments rooted in different strengths and perspectives. When weighing both sides, it becomes clear that the claim of being a "better driver" cannot be attributed solely to gender, but is instead influenced by a combination of personality, driving habits, and various social, psychological, and biological factors. Ultimately, a better driver is someone who prioritizes safety and does not risk their own or others' lives on the road. Whether male or female, the most important trait for a responsible driver is the ability to remain calm, obey traffic laws, and make sound decisions that ensure everyone’s well-being

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Raising children is a challenging and demanding task that requires parents to invest great care, support, and ample time to instill good manners and values. While traditionally mothers have been viewed as the primary caregivers, responsible for nurturing and guiding children, opinions on effective parenting are now more diverse. Some believe that mothers make better parents due to their natural ability to understand and connect with their children, creating a sense of comfort and security that the older generation often sees as uniquely maternal. However, in today’s society, many argue that fathers can be equally effective parents, pointing out that fathers often have a strong influence on their children’s behavior and discipline. Moreover, modern fathers are increasingly dedicated to taking an active role in their children’s lives, serving as positive role models and helping their children develop responsibility and respect.

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Firstly, mothers are often in a better position than fathers to understand the needs of their children, especially in their early years. Thanks to their natural patience, mothers are generally more adept at handling the challenges of infancy, a stage when patience is crucial. Additionally, mothers tend to be more attentive to ensuring that their children receive a balanced and nutritious diet, as they are usually more attuned to daily needs such as preparing school lunchboxes and monitoring eating habits. Moreover, studies indicate that mothers play a significant role in instilling morals, values, and ethics as children grow up, which can be essential for shaping a child’s character. This nurturing and attentive approach, combined with a deep understanding of their children’s needs, often enables mothers to connect on a level that supports emotional and moral development.

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Furthermore, children often feel more comfortable with their mothers than with their fathers, which strengthens the bond between mother and child. Children tend to be more attached to their mothers and feel free to reach out to them for support with almost any issue. For example, it is common to see both sons and daughters sharing their joys and sorrows with their mothers first, rather than with their fathers. This closeness highlights the important role that mothers play in their children’s upbringing, creating a secure environment where children feel understood and valued. In addition, mothers frequently serve as role models whom children naturally aspire to emulate, reinforcing their influence in shaping character and values. Given these connections, it is clear that mothers often establish themselves as better parents than fathers by providing both emotional comfort and a source of guidance for their children.

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On the other hand, fathers are often more effective in instilling discipline and ensuring that children listen to them. With their firm tone and authoritative presence, fathers can communicate expectations clearly, particularly when it comes to matters of discipline. Their guidance and protective role become crucial during their children's formative years, helping to shape responsible behavior. Fathers tend to be stricter in enforcing rules and are more likely to impose consequences when children make mistakes, which can foster a sense of accountability. For example, fathers often play a key role in helping their children develop the confidence and skills needed to succeed in competitive environments. This structured approach encourages children to be more disciplined and prepared to handle the challenges of adult life, demonstrating how fathers contribute significantly to their children's growth and success.

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In addition, fathers often take their role as providers seriously and strive to set a strong example for their children.

As the financial supporters of the family, fathers not only work hard to meet their children’s basic needs but also contribute to a stable household by supporting their spouses. By taking on the responsibility of being the primary breadwinner, many fathers dedicate themselves to ensuring that their families have a comfortable living environment and access to quality education. This commitment often involves sacrifices in terms of time spent with their children, yet it demonstrates their dedication to securing a better future for their families. This financial stability and sense of responsibility provide children with a valuable model of selflessness and perseverance, teaching them the importance of hard work and commitment to family well-being. Through their role, fathers exemplify the qualities of a devoted parent who prioritizes their family's needs, shaping their children’s understanding of responsibility and care.

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After weighing both sides of the discussion, it becomes clear that equality is the key when it comes to effective parenting. Both fathers and mothers play crucial, complementary roles in raising their children, with each contributing unique strengths that support their children’s development. While mothers often excel in providing emotional support and teaching values of respect and compassion, fathers are vital in guiding their children to face the world with confidence and resilience. Ultimately, parenthood should not be judged by one’s gender but rather by the dedication, love, and care that each parent brings to their role. It is this commitment to nurturing and guiding children that truly defines what it means to be a good parent

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Happiness is a sense of well-being or joy, and it is a feeling that comes over us when we know life is good. It is often said that the teenage years, between the ages of 13 to 19, are the happiest times in one's life. On one side, there is a school of thought that believes people have a great chance of feeling happiness in their teen years. On the other hand, some argue that teenage years are actually the most challenging period in life. The former group holds that the teenage years are joyful because parents take care of responsibilities, allowing teens the freedom to explore new experiences. Meanwhile, the latter group contends that teenage years are tough due to the stress and changes teenagers face.

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To begin with, parents take care of teenagers’ needs and responsibilities. Teenagers do not have to worry about family-related obligations or financial problems because all their needs are taken care of by their parents. As a result, their only duties are to attend school, complete their homework, and focus on their studies. They can spend quality time with friends, make new connections, and have fun without the burden of adult responsibilities, such as paying bills. Therefore, they are able to find pleasure in life without stress.

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In addition, teenagers have the freedom and opportunities to experience new things. At this stage in life, they are allowed to ask questions, make mistakes, and freely express their thoughts. They can enjoy activities they are passionate about and manage their social lives through evolving technology. Furthermore, teenagers often experience new and exciting emotions, like a first crush or falling in love, which many recall fondly as an important part of their youth. Thus, the freedom to explore and the thrill of new experiences contribute to a sense of happiness and excitement during teenage years.

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On the contrary, teenagers are also under an immense amount of stress. Stress is an unavoidable part of life for most teenagers as they struggle with schoolwork, exams, and extracurricular commitments. The pressure to perform well academically, often imposed by parents and teachers, makes life tough. Moreover, teenagers face the additional challenge of preparing for life beyond school, whether that means pursuing higher education or finding a job. Alongside academic pressures, they must also navigate complex social relationships, which can sometimes add emotional strain.

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Moreover, teenagers experience significant changes during these years, which can make life difficult. Physical, behavioral, and psychological transformations often bring misunderstandings, as society may reprimand them for acting in ways that adults see as inappropriate. For instance, parents and society expect teenagers to dress and behave decently, but teens may want to follow the latest fashion trends to express their identity. This clash of expectations makes it difficult for them to live happily, as they feel pressure from both sides. Furthermore, society expects them to act maturely while simultaneously treating them like children, leaving teens feeling deprived of independence and privacy.

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In conclusion, after weighing both sides, it aligns with the late Irving Berlin’s words, “Life is 10 percent what you make it and 90 percent how you take it.” Indeed, the perception of happiness during teenage years largely depends on one's outlook. However, in today’s competitive world, where academic and social pressures are ever-present, teenagers often face a challenging path to enjoying their youth. Ultimately, teens need to embrace all experiences, both joyful and challenging, as preparation for adulthood.

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Music is a universal aspect of human existence: it has no language, but it plays a significant part in people’s lives. While many people believe music brings people together, others claim otherwise. Some argue that music connects people from different cultures globally and strengthens social bonds within nations, whereas some critics contend that music is a source of contention between generations.

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Firstly, music has proven to be an invaluable tool in connecting different cultures across the globe. With a wide range of popular music genres such as country songs, pop music, and instrumental pieces, music acts as a bridge, uniting people from diverse backgrounds. The beats and lyrics flow in harmony, creating a soothing and relaxing atmosphere that promotes lightheartedness and fosters a sense of connection among listeners. Moreover, the rhythm of music has the power to synchronize people's movements, enhancing a shared experience that reinforces group identity. For instance, songs written in a lingua franca, such as "Despacito" and "Gangnam Style," have taken the global entertainment industry by storm, transcending language barriers and uniting people from different cultures. Therefore, through its universal appeal, music continues to connect cosmopolitan individuals all around the world.

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In addition to connecting cultures, music also plays a crucial role in uniting communities and strengthening social bonds within a nation. Patriotic music, in particular, addresses the needs of societies that may be divided or affected by conflict. As a form of expression, patriotic songs have the power to mobilize people and foster a shared national identity, resonating deeply across a country. For example, songs like "Inilah Barisan Kita" and "Jalur Gemilang" in Malaysia serve as a unifying force, acting as a "glue" that enhances social relationships and brings people together. These songs evoke joyful reactions, conveying powerful messages of solidarity and national pride. Furthermore, patriotic music naturally serves as a platform for social cohesion, transcending the boundaries of ethnicity and religion, and reminding citizens of their collective identity and common purpose.

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On the other hand, music often becomes a bone of contention between generations, primarily due to the differences in musical genres favored by each group. Bridging the gap between people of different ages through music can be challenging, as generation gaps tend to influence musical preferences. For instance, teenagers typically enjoy vibrant, high-energy genres like heavy metal, pop, or rock, while the elderly tend to favor classical or more soothing music. The older generation often gravitates towards songs with insightful and reflective lyrics, while younger listeners are drawn to music that may glorify sex, drugs, violence, or certain ideologies. As a result, the lyrics of these songs can deeply affect the mood and behavior of listeners, with young people sometimes using music as an outlet to express anger or dissatisfaction with societal issues, which can lead to unrest or chaos. Consequently, these contrasting musical interests, coupled with differing values expressed through song lyrics, can create tension and misunderstandings between generations, causing a divide that keeps them distant from one another.

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In conclusion, music is something that should be appreciated by everyone in society. Although music may sometimes serve to divide the young and old, it undoubtedly uses its universality to bring together people of different cultures globally. At a time when the world appears to be more divided than ever, it is important that we find common ground in music to build cross-cultural relationships.