Nowadays, on education have enhancing more to the technology education but the question is which most effectiveness between traditional education and online learning. However, there are two different opinion related to issues which most effective on education . Some people argue that online learning have bad impact to the student compare a traditional education while other people believe otherwise.
While both system education have advantages from their method, a hybrid model is ultimately a the most effective as it combine the discipline and social engage of physical class with technology affiance and autonomy of online learning.
Supporters of the my experience about face-to-face classroom the effectiveness on academic was big impact to student,
experience the student get from physical class is excel because student can know how to adapt environment school also can learn how to interact with teachers and peers as the result the student can strengthen their relationship on the future.
For example, during the physical class student ask a question about topic that don’t understand and when the student fluent about the topic the student can teach other friend that also don’t understand about the topic.
Furthermore, online class also most important component on academic student, based on my experience small possibility student to have gap between topic by topic this is positive effect i can agree because all the topic that teacher has teach can recording with technology and share to student for study also be more understand about the topic.
The opposite point of view is that face-to-face classroom also can decrease effectiveness on academic student because student have to study for a long period of time from morning to evening
In this situation can effect to memory also body will feel more fatigue an example burn out, impair memory and decrease focusing.
Additionally, effect negative from online classroom also have bad effect to student. A handful of student take advantages from online class to make an excuse for their mistake for this reason student performance will drop because lack of attention to the lesson and not taking the lesson seriously. Specifically, student not focus during the class online or play a game while a class started this is because the camera was off.
In summary, we can see how traditional education contribute on build discipline and social skill also how online learning give us efficient and autonomy, it is clear that these two method have their own strengths. Therefore, it is undeniable that system hybrid education system is the most effectiveness because succeed to combine a traditional class and technology sophistication. In connection with that, all parties involved in the education system should work together to ensure that this hybrid system is implemented so that it can benefit student.
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This discursive essay shows adequate content because it discusses both traditional and online learning with relevant points such as discipline, social interaction, flexibility, fatigue, and distraction, and it successfully proposes a hybrid model that matches the title; however, many ideas are under-developed and examples are sometimes unclear. Language is the main weakness, with frequent grammatical errors, incorrect word forms, awkward phrasing, and punctuation problems that often reduce clarity and fluency despite some appropriate vocabulary. Organization is generally acceptable, as the essay includes an introduction, several body paragraphs, and a conclusion, but the flow of ideas is uneven, transitions are weak, and some paragraphs are repetitive or loosely connected. Overall, the essay has suitable ideas and direction but needs significant improvement in grammar accuracy, sentence structure, and coherence.
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