Now these days, people are going under stress due to corona virus. Unemployment is another reasons for stress in people. But as we see that teenagers more prone to risk of not survival. Teenagers are full of aggression, stress depression due to work load in schools. Parents also don’t have time for their children. They are busy in their life and office work. Teen age is where a child need more care. This is the age where a child are in conflicts of their identity. Today, stress level is increases so that its parents responsibilities to take care of their children and try to understand and cooperate with them.
Young generation should learn self-defence skill. Confidence in any situation can help children, this is especially true in dangerous situations because knowing how to protect themselves from any physical threat will enhance their confidence and increase their survival chances. Self-defense is probably one of the hardest areas where you need to train your children for survival because becoming proficient in any type of self-defense be it martial arts, firearm, weapon training, requires a lot of time, discipline, and dedication. So, teaching children at least one means of self-defense would increase their chances of being safe in any situation by manifolds.
Secondly, young adults also lack of critical thinking and problem solving skill. To compete in national and international markets businesses need to engage the entire workforce in a problem-solving discussion. The purpose is to create products and services that meet customer demands. Whether the aim is to be more cost-effective, provide better quality or offer greater value for money, organizations need to constantly improve their unique selling point. For this reason employers need people who can properly analyses needs and provide solutions.
The third and last essential skill young adults need to develop is discipline. Even if the students can develop the best schedule for time management if they do not develop the discipline to carry it through, then what good would it be. Like time management, discipline is not a skill to be learned in a day. Students must constantly remind themselves not just every day but every so often that they have things to do. For example, if it is scheduled for today then they simply have to do it today. Discipline has been defined as “doing the right thing even when no one is looking.” This is precisely what young generation need to learn to do.
In conclusion, it is important to remember that young adults are just as smart and strong as we make them believe, so by teaching them to learn and practice survival skills will not be very difficult.
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The essay has a basic structure with an introduction, three main points, and a conclusion, but the organization could be clearer and more focused. The content touches on important issues like stress, self-defense, critical thinking, and discipline among youth, though the ideas sometimes lack clear connection and development. The language needs significant improvement, with frequent grammatical errors, awkward sentence construction, and incorrect word forms that affect clarity and flow. While the writer raises relevant concerns, the essay would benefit from better coherence, more specific examples, and careful language editing