Studies show that over 70% of people feel more confident and personally strong after they survive a difficult time in their life.This reasearch can be a proof that this method is effective to use.i absolutely agree with video that talking about facing hardship can be your opportunity to grow.benefit of handle or solve problem if your facing a hardship in your life so many but i will list three of the benefit which are it builds mental muscle, you can find your own method and last can understand and help other.
Firstly,benefit of handle or solve problem if your facing a hardship is build mental muscle.facing a hardship can make you mental muscle grow like muscle body if you training a lot you can get ideal ship of body. Facing a hardship can make you mental muscle grow like muscle body if you training a lot you can get ideal ship of body.Example you lost motivation at school after that the training you search method to solve and you do it again to be more confidant.
Secondly, benefit of facing harship is you can find your own method on you life to me comfortable with you own.Hardship also be a teacher to that force us to learn about something new way to manage our emotion and time.When life is simple , we do a same thing every day. But when the hard time come the old method can;t use anymore. You have forced to find a new method to do the work. Hardship is more like teacher that push you if you didn;t done your homework also can appear your hidden talent on yourself.
Last but not least, benefit of facing hardship in your life is Hardship is more like teacher that push you if you didn;t done your homework also can appear your hidden talent on yourself.You can guide the person lose motivation too you can give he advise how to manage their emotion or give a benefit of facing hardship.When the hard time come, it is more like gain a “map” in the dark forest,some people maybe don;t know how to manage that but you have some experience how feel stuck , you can lead other people out the forest.
In conclusion, benefit of facing your hardship bravely have a lot a benefit that can be cause you to change your lifestyle and mindset about facing hardship is opportunity not trouble.I agree that facing hardship can be opportunity to change lifestyle when having a problem and you can easyly solve the problem.Although, hard times can make us feel like unhappy or unmotivated, they force us to search new methods to be more skillful in life and grow. By our own struggles, we achive the tools and the concerned to help others do the same.
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The essay presents a clear stance on the topic and includes relevant ideas about how facing difficulties can build strength, showing an understanding of the content; however, the points are often repetitive and examples are not clearly explained or developed, which limits the depth of argument. In terms of organization, the essay follows a basic argumentative structure with an introduction, body paragraphs, and a conclusion, but topic sentences are weak, transitions are limited, and some ideas are repeated across paragraphs, affecting overall coherence. Regarding language, frequent grammatical errors, spelling mistakes, incorrect word choices, and sentence structure problems significantly affect clarity and readability, although the intended meaning is generally understandable. Overall, the essay communicates ideas with effort and relevance but lacks accuracy, clarity, and effective development. Based on the MUET band descriptors, this essay would be best placed at Band 3, as it conveys basic ideas but is hindered by serious language inaccuracies and limited organization.
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