Social media has been part of our lives in this new era where technology become more advance as time goes by. While social media offers many benefits, it is also give us negative effects if we can get hold of ourselves. Social media can misleading us to a fake news and lifestyle, distract us from focusing on what we must do especially as a student and can be addiction to certain person.
First and foremost, social media can misleading us to a fake news and lifestyle. People tends to use it for aesthetics purpose and not for real lifestyle.
For example, people can just waking up in the early morning and take some picture of him do exercises and post it to social media even though it’s just a picture not him do an actual exercises. In conclusion, while social media entertaining and inspiring, it is not one hundred percent what we saw in it is actually true. We should use it wisely and do not believe anything without knowing what the actual truth.
Other than that, social media can distract us from focusing on what we must do especially as a student. Student number one priority is to study and get a good grades, but social media can be a tool as distraction for student not to focusing on studying. To be clear, student want to have a short break about thirty minute after tired of study, but when they scrolling social media they didn’t realize how much time has been spend on it. It’s makes them feel like a short break but actually it’s been more than an hour of break. To conclude, social media can give us massive impact in our study in good and a bad way. We just need to be wiser how to use it. Being aware of how time slips when we use social media is the way how we balancing between enjoying and productive at the same time.
Lastly, Social media can be addiction to certain person. People tends to thing that social media is a way for them to escape from reality or have a good “me time”. However, when they dive deeply into it for the entire night just for scrolling and watching social media it’s actually an addiction rather than a form of relaxion. in other words, they sacrifice their sleep schedule for better health just for a sake of social media. In short, we must stay sharp and alert how long has we been using social media as a first step from become addiction to social media. To sum up with, social media can give us negative effect in our lives such as misleading us to fake news and lifestyle, be distraction from focusing what we need to do and also can be addiction to some people.
To sum up with, social media can give us negative effect in our lives such as misleading us to fake news and lifestyle, be distraction from focusing what we need to do and also can be addiction to some people. While social media can be useful, me must satay alert so that social media doesn’t control ourselves or effect our good lifestyle. I hope people who got manipulate by the social media can overcome themselves and don’t let it fool you. We must be wise when using social media or else we will be lost in the pleasure of social media.
One Response
The essay follows a clear structure with an introduction, three main body paragraphs, and a conclusion. The writer discusses relevant points about the negative effects of social media—such as spreading fake lifestyles, causing distractions, and leading to addiction—which shows an understanding of the topic. However, the language needs significant improvement, with frequent grammar errors, awkward phrasing, and inconsistent verb tenses that affect clarity and fluency. Vocabulary is basic and often misused (e.g. “can misleading us,” “effect our lifestyle”). The content is valid but repetitive, and the arguments would be stronger with more precise examples and better organization of ideas. Overall, the essay conveys the main message, but clearer expression and language accuracy are needed to improve its effectiveness.