E-commence nowadays are common on our daily-lifes. The increase of power-buying nowadays are very high among comsumers in Malaysia and because of this, online shopping gives an oppurtunity for shoppers to put their product on e-commence so they can sell their product without comsumers to buy their product on specific locations. In my based on experience, i believe and agree that e-commence has revolutionised our daily lifes on the way we shop. The reason behind of this is that e-commence can save consumers a lot of specfic things that useful for them.
First, Empowered shopping. It gives a lot benefits for comsumers especially for someone who has their own reason on choosing onling shopping rather than traditional shopping. For example, online shopping gives you an accessibility for some comsumers to knowing the details of the products that been choose by comsumers. Comsumers can discover about the details of the product that been choose, for example; the location the product been produced, the ingredients that been use for the product, the rating and how many sale that been sold of the products and more. It can benefits for someone who are practical and alert about the product that been choose. So, empowered shopping is something that revolutionised the way that been shop.
Second is Wider product choices and comparison. It can give a lot of variety choices and can let comsumers to compare the product based of the choice of comsumers. It can consume comsumers to choose the products based on their likes, prices, type of benefits on the products and more.
Wider product choices and comparison can give comsumers to had a lot of choices on choosing which products are better based on comsumers perspectives which is important to improve customer loyalty on specific product so they will believe that online shopping gives a lot benefit for them. So, wider product choices and comparison on online shopping is important to let comsumers to had a choices on their product buying.
Lastly, Assesibility. Assesibility are usually the most revolutionised thing that happens on online shopping. It gives a lot of benefits in terms of comsumers that can saved a lot of thing of comsumers such as saving time, no need to go on specific locations to get the products, and more.
Assesibility are the most important aspect on online shopping because it can let comsumer to buy some products that are specific on some location without going to the specific location, for example, the food that are specific on some location such as Dodol, Mee Siput and so on. This also can save comsumers in terms of letting them to get what they want without spending their time, money and even go to the specific destination. Overall, accessibility is the most revolutionised thing in online shopping.
E-Commence are truly the revolutionised thing that happen on the way comsumers shops. My own perspective, i believe that E-Commence has given a lot benefit through out on the daily lifes comsumers nowadays. The existence of e-commence has revolutionised the daily-lifes on comsumers and it gives a lot of benefits through out a lot specific things that can save comsumers cost. I also believe that e-commence need to update and even upgrade their services so that they can gain their customer loyalty and trust on buying products on online shopping.
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Repeated misspellings (e.g., “e-commence” instead of e-commerce, “comsumers” instead of consumers, “assesibility” instead of accessibility) and grammatical errors distract from the content and undermine credibility. The essay also lacks clear organisation and cohesion, with repetitive explanations and awkward sentence structures that make some points unclear. Additionally, the argument is one-sided and largely descriptive, focusing only on benefits without acknowledging any limitations or counterarguments of e-commerce, such as delivery issues, security risks, or overconsumption. To improve, the writer needs to correct language errors, organise ideas more clearly, and include at least one counterargument to strengthen the argumentative depth.
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