Sometimes it is true that young adult today lack of traditional survival skill. In modern world, its not necessarily, while many young adult today are more skilled about new technologies. Young adult today are not lack of survival skill, its a common misconception that the world portrays about gen-z today, because the people believe that smartphones made our brains not function correctly. Older generation or we call it “boomers” are the one spread the information, they only saying that to avoid our gen-z to not playing on the smartphones everyday. Today world required different type of survival skills due to changes with modern society.. Young adult are equipped with digital literacy and problem-solving abilities that are crucial in today’s world. Culture also playing a big role to a gen-z survival skill. “Strike while the iron is hot” is the correct saying, teach a children a basic survival skill and they will grow up with a knowledge. In Asia, many gen-z grow up under pressured to succeed in highly competitive education system. While in the west, often promotes individualism and personal freedom. Based on that, in Asia benefit more in terms of critical thinking. To conclude, young adult today are not lack of survival skill. Survival skills are evolving and in modern world its required a different set of survival skill. Its a misconception that everyone believe and mostly young adult are easy to adapt on technologies. Also, gen-z around the world are different, some are more skills than the other.
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Congratulation! 100% Human Written. Your essay raises an important and relevant topic about how the concept of “survival skills” is evolving in the modern world, especially for Gen Z. You’ve tried to present a defense for young adults by arguing that they possess new forms of survival skills such as digital literacy and adaptability. However, the ideas need to be more clearly expressed and organized to make your message stronger and easier to follow.
However an improvement can be made such as the Organization and Flow:
Ideas jump between topics (digital skills, cultural comparison, idioms) without smooth transitions.
The paragraph about Asia vs. the West is interesting but needs clearer explanation and support.